Friday, March 7, 2014

Fiction 55:The Attack

This post has been written as part of Write Tribe Festival Of Words.

Jeet was nervous. He was accompanying his dad for the first time on their mission. They carefully moved, dodging past the obstacles, with an eye out for unexpected attacks. Suddenly, a huge cannon ball landed near them.

The lady in the kitchen bent down to lift the fallen apple as the ants scurried to safety. 


35 comments:

  1. Hey...it's funny :) Good one indeed...

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  2. haha!!
    Oh that was unexpected!! Good one! :D

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  3. Nicely done, Jaish. Feels good to be back here. :)

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  4. Very well said in just a few words

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  5. Were they red or black ants?

    If they were red ones, you could write a sequel on one of their biting missions :P

    Cheers
    CRD

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  6. Lucky, the canon ball did not land on Jeet:) Very nice imagination, Jaishree!

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  7. aaha :) For a moment I was terrified for Jeet :) Then the cannonball told me the secret :D Good one, Jaish :)

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  8. This was surprizingly amazing. I read twice and couldn't believe what I read. :)) Feeling like eating a cannon ball in front of me right now :P Very nice! :)

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  9. Oh, ha ha! I never expected that! Lovely work, Jaish!!

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  10. Wow, what a twist! Loved reading it.

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  11. Oh! The poor ants! What all missiles & cannons they have to dodge!!!! :) Great one, Jaish!

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  12. Ants! I was expecting them to be petty thieves! Good one Jaish!

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  13. This was a nice twist in the tale.

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  14. LOL!! Good one! How are you, Jaish?! Sorry I haven't visited in a long time!

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  15. hahahaha That was such good fun!

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  16. Nice twist at the end ! :D lol

    Do stop by my blog too.... been a while :) i'm back to writing after a bit of a break!

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  17. Hahaha... That such a lovely story.

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  18. hey that was soo cool..

    P.S. - we have the same blog template ..

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  19. heloooooooooooo how do you do.. :)

    lovely made me laugh :)

    Bikram

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  20. Ah what an attack-that's how it must seem to them.

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  21. ha ha ha... i took sometime :) Jaishwrites :)

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  22. a first timer on ur blog. !! Good twist with a funny bone that too on a 55 word challenge ! Kudos to u.

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